patriotic_divider_bows.png
patriotic_divider_bows.png


Snapshot of a Pet
dog.aspx
dog.aspx
horse_1.jpg
horse_1.jpg
fish.jpg
fish.jpg
lizard_green.jpg
lizard_green.jpg



Planning completed on notebook paper due Tuesday for daily gradesRough draft due and Editing workshop on Wednesday for a daily gradesFinal copy typed on WORD due Thursday for test grade!
colorful draco.jpg
colorful draco.jpg






SNAPSHOT ESSAY
snapshot of a dog.htm
snapshot of a dog.htm

snapshot of a dog.htm

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americanstaffordshireterriers2.jpg
What Thurber's dog might have looked like!

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Draco dirty (2).jpg
My Draco
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buster.JPG
My Buster


Assignment! Each student will...
“Snapshot of a Dog” James Thurber p. 446 Adventures in Literature: you will write your own snapshot of a pet. Use Thurber’s writing as a model to create a formal piece of writing. You can/will create a wiki page with this piece of writing and can include a picture or two of your pet!


SNAPSHOT ESSAY.doc
SNAPSHOT ESSAY.doc

SNAPSHOT ESSAY.doc



Snapshot planning.docx
Snapshot planning.docx

Snapshot planning.docx



Snapshot editing workshop.doc
Snapshot editing workshop.doc

Snapshot editing workshop.doc

FORMAT:


Paragraph 1 Introduction – Opening sentence to include what reminded you of the pet and a hook sentence to draw the reader in. You could mention here where the pet came from/how you got the pet
2-4 sentences



Paragraph 2 Description –Include the name of the pet, breed, appearance, and personality traits. 6-8 sentences



Paragraph 3 Vignette – Students choose ONE incident involving the pet to write about. The piece will include:20+ sentences


expanded moment – taking one moment/incident/situation and expand it into a complete explanation/story


  • figurative language - Hyperbole

Adjective beginning – Using an adjective (ED or ING ending) at the beginning of a sentence. Snarling, Draco crouched low and waited for the raccoon to make a move.



  • Hyphenated adjective – (from Home and Other Big, Fat Lies) “Like the look-on-the-bright-side ones who go on and on until your head is ready to explode…” or She gave me that oh-no-you-didn't look after I told her what happened.

  • Absolute – Noun/ING – Tail wagging, ears twitching, Draco ran to greet me when I returned from my trip.


Spelling, capitalization, and punctuation
Complete sentences, no fragments